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Would You Hear me?/Lay your body over me
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Would You Hear me?/Lay your body over me |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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As the earth settles above me and the snow falls lightly... I shiver here silently. Tell me, if I begged for you to lay your warm body over me, would you hear me? As the stiffness leaves me and the darkness embraces gently... I weep here tenderly. Tell me, if my tears whisper to you, would you hear me? As my body sleeps eternaly craddled in my satin lined grave and I need you to comfort me, would you lay your warm body over me... Tell me, would you hear me? There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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brandywine Junior Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 19Illinois |
I really like this one. Deep and moving in its own way. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Tell me,if my tears whisper to you, would you hear me? Wonderful Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
truely beautiful makes you wanna sigh merely_a_jester Are scarecrows just like men, and do you hold That a false coin is just as good as gold? Moliere, "Tartuffe" |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Tell me, would you hear me? I had a cold feeling when I read that last line. Like being alone or left behind by a love. This was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. Well done! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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