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Wendy Flora
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 182
Virginia

0 posted 2000-01-19 12:46 PM


A man stares back from the pearly void. The smooth cream
Swirls, ripples.  
The unknown is reaching into the center -
and finding nothing.
Staring, searching,
Never finding.
The moon is the eye of the sky.
Vast, deep, and full of wonder.
The thin crescent slices the clouds
The swelling moon mirrors
The changes in my soul.
I think the fascination with the moon
Comes with the similarity between its predictably inconstancy
And our own.


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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

1 posted 2000-01-19 01:31 AM


This was different but I liked it.  Oh yeah the unfinished one is hard.  I tried but nothing came out so I saved it and I'll try later OK

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-01-19 01:35 AM


Interesting connection. I enjoyed this.
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