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hathor Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17 |
Despair. A swirling vortex of hatred A bottomless pit of pain An earsplitting eruption of violence A sweltering flame of ignorance A razor sharp blade of humanity Despair. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
hathor, I love the power in this...so much said in so few words. Excellent read here and welcome to Dark Passions. Maharet "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome again Hathor. Liked this first poem a lot, especially the line ' a sweltering flame of ignorance'. Looking forward to your next offering already  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Excellent use of metaphor. I enjoyed this much Jenny Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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