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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-01-18 10:38 AM



On the horizon it comes
The beautiful rays of the new sun
lapping around the ocean warm
We have weathered the final storm

Now we are free we the children of Eve
No more held or kept in sway
All the peace that comes this day
On the wings of the mist in grey

The way spreads before us
In the fine combed sand
Of the world we inhabit
Uphere on this land

All the pain and misery
All but gone away
And the sereniny upon us
on this day of days

Peace thrives in this world
No guns or knives
No willing dead or pain survives
In a world where hearts collide.

Gentle winters and warm springs
Wash away childish things
Yet we all have far to go
As gods creation flows to and fro

Now we leave her for the stars
Up past neptune round by mars
for we all have far to go
to the next star glimmering afar

 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
1 posted 2000-01-18 02:46 PM


Beautiful Walter...loved the imagery.  
~*Dark Enchantress*~


 "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things."
-Antonio Smith



Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

2 posted 2000-01-19 01:02 AM


Good thoughts here Walter Poe!!  IF only it would happen!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-02-03 07:56 PM


Sometimes we feel the sadness and misery more than others.   As long as we are in this body we will experience sadness but also joy and happiness.  I look forward to the day when my soul will be released to experience life without the misery.  Nicely written Walter.   James
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-02-03 08:44 PM


A beautiful dream Walter... you younger ones are the future of this world.  You can make a dream like this become a reality.  I hope you do, all of you.  As usual Walter a beauty  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



shock gospel
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 33

5 posted 2000-02-03 09:48 PM


there are those who say, wouldn't that be nice and some say, what a cool dream. But get a grip on the words, the Kingdom of God is at hand spoken by Jesus, and you'll see this poem, come to pass.

 

armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
6 posted 2000-02-03 11:38 PM


Quite the imaginary...aren't we?

*smile*  Well done...

Carman

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

7 posted 2000-02-04 08:49 AM


Nicely done. It would be great if the only things that collided, instead of guns and people or knives and people, were warm, caring hearts. Like another said (sorry I forgot who! ^_^ , I look forward to the day when my soul is set free from all the misery of this world.

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 2000-02-04 02:22 PM


A great poem, I really love it  
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

9 posted 2000-02-04 04:34 PM


Walter,
this is a very beautiful poem and message, Im glad it got brought back up so I could see it.very good work.
take care,janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



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