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Dark Poetry #1

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DayDreamer
Junior Member

since 2000-01-16

Posts 30

0 posted 2000-01-16 06:50 PM

In the nightmare of desertion
the visions unfold.
In the blackness and the dark
like ledgends untold,
Of lonliness and lost loves
and the emptiness that be.
Locked up in a cage of hate
waiting to be free.

In the darkness of the night
all the hope is gone.
Groping through a winding maze
searching for the dawn
when I can understand the past
and these visions haunting me.
Stumbling through a land of thoughts,
wanting to be free.

In the blackness of a dream
I see a speck of light.
Shining through the deepest fears
never giving up the fight.
Against my thoughts and dark emotions,
the light will come to me.
Holding on to love and faith,
searching to be free.

[This message has been edited by DayDreamer (edited 01-16-2000).]

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-01-16 07:08 PM

Well search no more DD, here at Passions you can speak out freely, share problems and vent.
Welcome to our happy home and I hope you'll enjoy your stay here.
Really enjoyed your first poem

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

2 posted 2000-01-16 07:11 PM

Ana,
That is good I never read that in your notebook. I like it a lot!
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

dreemr
Junior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 34
Covington, LA, USA

3 posted 2000-01-16 07:54 PM

Very nice poem. Keep your eye on that speck of light...strive to reach it. You may never...as I haven't yet. But the quest to touch it gives you purpose and direction, at least it does me. Thank you for sharing this with us. Look forward to more.

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

4 posted 2000-01-16 09:29 PM

I loved the line--In the blackness of a dream-I see a speck of light
This says so much to give everyone hope that there is light after darkness. Welecome and hope to read more soon.

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