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ABC 's of Death (challenge from Bojopy) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Begining note This is a poem that evolved into death I gues, rather than life, but also a life that turned to death? (I'm not sure) Anyway, enjoy! Alas brittle corpse Dead, exerted, finally free Gone, hung, Imortal judgement killed Lost life mourning nothing Obliterating perpetual quests Repelling Silent torment Useless vacant whispers eXisisted, Yearning years Zilch! End Note This was a hard one to do! Thinking of "Z" was the hardest, especialy trying to wrap up my semi-serious poem without making it sound silly. JOY |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You did fine Joy, maybe I did mine in the wrong way?? Anyway, it was fine  < !signature-->Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 01-15-2000).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
No, Isis. Yours was great! I doubt anyone could do it wrong when being creative about it!! JOY |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
i like it the phrasing and unique words make the feeling all the more meaningful, in my opinion, even if you weren't alphabatizing merely_a_jester |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You did a great job Joy I enjoyed the read! Jenny Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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