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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I was here yesterday When all i was And all i am Was all i ever need to be But now i am not he Of the world I used to be I find myself obsolete Do you ever look out At the sea like you unchanging of your time Now look at lifes crime Mirrored in my eyes A past I cannot recognise A glitz i missed my life a glitch My memories of life My heart is lost In my deep strife look at me i am forgot The obsolete are left to rot On the heap of junk yards cot I am left now gone away To be remembered, maybe, one day Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
To to be remembered hopefuly, Walter Poe, For the poetry that you share and show When you, the obsolete, rotting dead away, You can know you have left something here that will ultimatley stay |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
As Joy said Walter, if nothing else, hopefully we will be remembered for the occasional poem that touched someone, once briefly. I too feel sort of obsolete. The thinking man's malady????.. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Walter this was excellent!!! Obsolete uuuu! I know the feeling! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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