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Lucifer's Story |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
Looking down on creation Of prosimian evolving to man Learning of the frustration As the garden's growth began Bipedal's roam the land Teaching of Sheol These new creatures only demand To live to see tomorrow All this time he watched from above Learning to hate While learning to love As he told himself, "His plan is nothing at this rate" People, as they were called by Him Hadn't knowing of fault Or knowing of sin All they knew was what was taught Lucifer looked down horrified Watching these people digging a hole One of the elders had died Lucifer watched them pray to his soul He approached the Creator and hollered deep within What were you thinking to give them such a prize I thought murder was bad but not like this sin! What? Now they see souls? Through mortal eyes!! I hate what your doing, Your showing them lies! He replied, Walk on this canvas and look around Don't make any miracles or an angelic sound Just look around and tell me what you see You will see a glorious creation working within me After spending 100 days upon the earth He met a girl who was extremely gorgeous The feelings in man which stirreth Made the angelic man fall for Sinfulbliss One night of ecstacy turned out to be death When god saw this he cursed the angel on sight Take your last angelic breath I condemn you from heaven, your burning sin is too bright Lucifer cried for a 100 days to see god's face I don't love me, I love your human race! Give me one more chance to prove to you what its like Come down and try it yourself, i know that you just might Lucifer traveled for a thousand years Upon a wretched place we call home Here he cried a many tears Wanting again to see God's thrown As he passed through the Great City He hard of a man named Yahweh The man, For days and nights summed to forty The lamb prayed to Father for another way Lucifer traveled to the desert to look for this man He noticed a person hunched over about to be dead He saw it was GOD as human, Lucifer only ran Father your starving. Here turn this stone into bread Jesus replied, Don't tempt me Satan, I took your advice I became flesh, but not thorugh my powers, through a human father I was born in a stable infested by fleas, ticks, and mice. Lucifer said, Your thirsty, flow from this stone, water. You stupid angel! No wonder I cast you down. Dont you see the devils, the atheist everywhere? Don't you see them running through town? Im here as a sacrifice my innocence to bear. I'll die for all the sins of this earth And then I'll be their servant king Give hope to a sinful child at birth So mortal's can hear angels sing Jesus don't do this! Look all around. We are on the highest hill of which we can stand. You could be the king of every city, of every town. Yet you were born as a mortal, and die as a god. I die knowing where i go Will i feel any pain I know Father will not make it so This is my plan, where God's thrown will reign! You die as a god?! What kind of sacrifice might that be? Your body will decay to sod. And all your followers will see. Oh there your wrong, Memnoch, there your so wrong After three days i rise from the tomb Defeating sin and decay all the while long You will see, the time is soon. 10 days passed, the day of judgement A cross bears his name Yet few know what it meant A criminal to them it was all the same An earthquake? is that all you can do? Oh you man of so many surprises. Raise the dead? I call you a fool! You died as a god, not feeling mortal pain, just like you said. Three days later he lived up to what he said After fighting with me He raised from the dead Lucifer hollered, You hide from the mortals the truth, What they should see! I CAST YOU DOWN SATAN! To the abyss where you belong You'll live with the other heathens Heaven will never hear your song. Lucifer remains in hell to teach the sinfull souls Of God's thrown, of his heaven. A place he used to call "home" Every day Lucifer dreamed of the wonderful number seven. I've always been looked at as being the bad one If only I would've kept my mouth shut If only I left it all alone Now im stuck in Hell where every soul digs a deeper rut Now you know the true story The story why i was cast down I saw God's true glory Died as a god, born a baby in bethlehem town Note: Im not an atheist or anything, just my viewpoint on this subject. Hope i didnt offend anyone. ****Alot of the numbers and names are symbolic Yahweh - Hebrew for Jesus 7 - symbolic for Christ 6 - Symbolic for Satan Memnoch - Satan Lucifer - Satan < !signature--> There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner [This message has been edited by ChainedAngel (edited 01-14-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed an interesting theory. I really enjoyed it, you have the story teller in you. I don't mind the lengthy read either. Well done CA  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Let me first say there is no way you are atheist!! Because you think of heaven and hell. As for the story you said, and did so well, there may be truth to it but who and why will know?< !signature--> "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-14-2000).] |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
A very negotiable topic indeed. Soon i think the answers will come. Time will tell my friend. Time will tell There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
CA...thouroughly enjoyed reading this. What a unique perspective. I've never heard it told from his viewpoint. Nicely done |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
dreemr - The way I heard it told, through Lucifer's perspective, was in Anne Rice's Memnoch the Devil. An extroadinary book. It inspired me to write this poem. Tahnks for the repy. Always Appreciated There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner |
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Thaddeus Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 78MA |
Wow,very impressive. You have recast Lucifer's perspective very well. Milton must be smiling somewhere. I'm not sure this will make sense,but the way you have created new possibilities with this important tale makes me think of it somewhat as some science fiction storys play with time and events, things happening flash forward and flashback, challenging our understanding of Lucifer's role and where the fall and sin occur. Intriguing. |
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