Sunrise (Challenge from Isis)

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ChainedAngel
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since 2000-01-07

Posts 55
tx

0 posted 2000-01-13 01:05 AM

It comes every morning
Leaves me with a smile
When the light starts pouring
It covers many, many miles

The light brings new life
Sunflowers turn to see
Through all the suffering and strife
It still brings comfort to me

Growing up as a child
I wanted a best friend
My soul was strong, though very mild
But it all turned out well in the end

Now that I look up into the sky
And watch this miracle of today
I begin to break into a smile
As the sunrise brings new hope in every way.

There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

1 posted 2000-01-13 01:19 AM

Wow this was uplifting!!! What was the challange?

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

ChainedAngel
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since 2000-01-07

Posts 55
tx

2 posted 2000-01-13 01:25 AM

ISIS: What is something in nature you love above all else?
CA: The Sunrise
ISIS: a poem about why you love the sunrise

Isn't exactly great but it was a spur of the moment thing. I was bored goshdarnit! < !signature-->

There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

[This message has been edited by ChainedAngel (edited 01-13-2000).]

Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-13 01:32 AM

For the spur of the moment it is really good! geeeees don't yell at me dangit!! LOL

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

ChainedAngel
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since 2000-01-07

Posts 55
tx

4 posted 2000-01-13 01:35 AM

Thanks Bojopy

BTW i wasn't yelling, kinda hard for me to yell if ya know what i mean. Just thinking really loud.

< !signature-->

There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

[This message has been edited by ChainedAngel (edited 01-13-2000).]

haze
Senior Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA

5 posted 2000-01-13 01:37 AM

beautiful...just beautiful

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2000-01-13 06:11 PM

CA Absolutely beautiful!!

Are you comfortable with it? It may take time. For a spare of the moment thing you wrote beauty.
Bravo. If you wanna talk more anytime just give me a hoy. Bravo

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

ChainedAngel
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since 2000-01-07

Posts 55
tx

7 posted 2000-01-13 11:02 PM

Thanks haze and isis

There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

8 posted 2000-01-13 11:19 PM

This is indeed beautiful CA. Kind of refreshing seein this poem in the Dark.

Btw, just had to let you know I got a laugh out of the whole yelling thing between you and Bo!

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