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Days of Heartache |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Midnight moon Beautiful blue Lights the sky Fills my room Softly it falls Amid dreams call Sleepless heart Remembers your all Hearts callous glove tears at my love Leaving me shattered Leaveing me sore Days lights invadeing my nights still without sleep revealing my plight Heat burns as the sun turns Winding its way through its days lights I see the night approaching in slight I see my breath in the air so fresh Finaly i sleep Finaly i dream You are here again Your death is unreal I know i will wake I do not want The bitter day to break So i hold you tight and relish this last night Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
there is a powerful and drawing play here (very well done with in the iambic) drew me through well! Excellent work Poe-Poet! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Powerful and alluring I would say. As always Walter a triumph. I was SO surprised to hear you were 18 in my head you were around 30!!! That is a positive comment ok?  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
18 oh my gosh you words seem to reveal age. I see a long and prosperous future in the writing you will share. Keep them coming!! Wonderful poem here! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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