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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Images in the eyes so alluding and so brittle with monstrous spirits and suprise So many moments reflected to memory within them and all they can subdue Friction upon the lids bring flashes of great light and irritation at length But closed in a sleepin dream of 'REM' of nightmare they visualize whats not new So tell us uncleansed eyes what reality are you in and what shadows do you see How many floaters will afloat with these lookers that rain upon the saddened cue Will the great light appear in the image of a dream or within daylight Will the eyes go beyond while taking its thoughts Imagined as true Who's to say the answers of the I NOT EYE "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Too late at night for me to deeply ponder this, you are smart my friend!!  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I often ponder the perception of the eyes in dream...almost as if they are a link to another dimension. Your last two stanzas really slam it home. Good job. Michael |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I'm sorry If I always seem to be deep. Not all my stuff is like it but they seem to be going that way. Michael thanks for your response. I think alot of the unknown may lye in dreams or the subcontious. Thanks again "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Bojopy, you have a powerful pen. Very well done...the subconscious divined in dreams-deveined...FABULOUS DEPTH...EXTREME KUDOS! |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Thank you haze. I'm a little different in the ways of what I think about. "I can't say why, as for I know. It began so slowely but now its a grow". Anyway if you want to hear how strange I am read my first post A New God. Thanks again................Bojopy "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Bo- Don't apologize for being deep. My mind loves a good challenge. And you certainly come up with some tough ones. As far as dreaming goes, I wouldn't know much about it. I have not dreamt much in the last four years. I don't know why. Once upon a time I used to dream quite often, sacrificing alot of sleep. At any rate, I liked this one too. A great perspective on dreams. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I don't sleep well either. But when I do I dream such weird things. Once I dreamt about eating a bag of chips that never ended! Anyone know what that may mean? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
Bojopy...really liked the poem. I have some comments on dreams (go figure ) seems appropriate here. I think that if we could only master control of them, it would be likehaving the ultimate power to do whatever we want (if only in our minds). But as it is our minds that perceive all of the sensations associated with the things we do anyway, then i think it'd be almost as good as actually doing them. Kinda like natural virtual reality. Anyway...again, loved the poem. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Dreemr I have to agree with you on controliing our dreams. When I was in high school I was playing around with that idea and found I could do it(not all the time). But after high school I seemed to lose that ability and I have a theory on that: If we have control of our lives outside of dreams that in some way we will have more control of dreams. And back then I was in complete control (at least in my mind I was). Just a theory and I think I am going to try and do this again now that I thought about it. Lets all give that a try and write about if we can!!! Now that is a challenge....LOL "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I like the lines-will the great light appear in the imagine of a dream or within daylight. Your endless bag of chips? Now that's a munchie attack dream!!  I find I too can sometime control my dreams. The mind is a mysterious place "! You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King |
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