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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada 
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. street lit lovers day-shamed & lame in their parking lot tryst their tribal trade spent without worth or word lost in payment prayer forgiveless for hunger lust carnal-crusted romance run aground go go sex cuisine (gourmet 69) recycled art-sex and spattered backseat czars these two (vinyl lovers) fingers clutching limbs crushing hearts feeding (me now) the sound of souls retching caressing leatherette these two lovers and all the love that each could shove revenge for grievances and long forgotten lives this their brotherhood of death their curdled eyes crusted, curled lips and only daggered waves of pain reward for beggars' jism only echoes of empty strip-malls mark their loveless lovers passion and the sodium lit shadows of Sodom's greed a testament to something less than lovers' lost-and-found as real as rock and stone bound Big Bang physics and other hedonistic topics (All Praise!) the dawn appears (o hell ) they melting into morning crowds to mock the day with sleep -as penetrated souls pretending child's innocence (Why me?) they fondle cherubim and oral-rape angels they are lovers of the dead this is their worry their story of mating hating without progeny Kevin |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Awesome Kevin! I so like this style of free verse,very full of meaning  Welcome to Passions Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I see many meanings within this and I love to think about such things. I wonder if this was a well thought out writing or just came to you? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada |
Well thought out? Hmmm.. I'm still revising it if that's what you mean. Otherwise, I never just write and watch "it" happen. I decide what I want to say and then I write a poem that says THAT. Sometimes I may discover ways of saying things in passing that will later on become part of another poem. Which is not to say that once the decision is made and I know where I want to go that the whole process takes a lot of time. Kevin |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I have to thank this site for making me revise my work because I never did before. I usually just wrtie and let it be but now I'm looking over what I wrote and writing it different in here. Oh yeah Kevin just a little somthing to do sometime try a fillibuster! A fillibuster is just writing without stopping and you will be suprised what you come up with! I don't think you need it but I love doing it and I thought I would pass it on. "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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