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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
Just sit straight I don't even care if you listen Just act like you care And that everything really matters We're so insignificant A speck upon a speck Inside this glass ball Shake it up and watch our lives fall So why do you want it? It's not so great of a thing So what happens when that ball breaks? Will it change or all be the same? Brag to your own Where are you When you loose your sense of direction Who to hold onto? When you hold enemies closer then friends Oh my god we have a break through Return to the lost and found Cause your soul is lost But your mind is found The sick are the sane So what about you? So much sicker then the rest! you see it all? Try our hardest to fit in Where do you go When you don't fit in Guess to the lost and found There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Whew!! This could go so many ways.. I really liked it. At first I thought you were condeming someone else, then you turned it on yourself too! Kept me guessing  At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Whew!! This could go so many ways.. I really liked it. At first I thought you were condeming someone else, then you turned it on yourself too! Kept me guessing At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Whew!! This could go so many ways.. I really liked it. At first I thought you were condeming someone else, then you turned it on yourself too! Kept me guessing At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Whew!! This could go so many ways.. I really liked it. At first I thought you were condeming someone else, then you turned it on yourself too! Kept me guessing At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Great job ChainedAngel...related to this one very well. But remember...we weave our own chains and we have the power to break them. The question is, do you really want to? "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow, such powerful emotions,and so beautifully written. Verse Two states the state of humanity so well !!!!! Jenny Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
You expressed yourself very well in this poem.Hope to read another one from you |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! This hits you like a ton of bricks and keeps you wondering and wondering and wondering????? I like the metaphors within this piece a great deal....... "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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