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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
You said you don't want to hurt me And you don't want to make me cry I can't stop the feelings That flood deep inside Try as I might to cover them up You know just how I feel Knowing that you are in love With another beautiful woman cuts deep within my soul How I would love To be in her shoes For just one moment in time To know your love Runs so very deep for me Friends and Lovers Is all that we are No room for the hope That we could be something more |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I can only say that this breaks my heart. Jenny Lee< !signature--> Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 01-06-2000).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I am sorry for you. I know how this feels. I lost who I thought was the love of my life to a situation like this. But he did it out of lust not love. Another good piece. |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
Thank you, I won't give up hope for him. She doesn't want a relationship, so I have to deal with a ghost, who may one day slip away. |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's sad when these things happen but it's life......... sad but a great piece full with emotions p/s don't give up  |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's sad when these things happen but it's life......... sad but a great piece full with emotions p/s don't give up |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Sad indeed.....I really liked the way you portrayed feeling loved in this ....about how you want to be her just for a moment!!!!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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