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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Blowing breezes calm thy weary soul Swim the oceans which contain the tidal waves While knocking me about Breath is stolen Torn from my chest, my heart beats its last Awaken from endless sleep Arise to the darkest day The snow bites my feet, my ears, my fingers, and my lips Lifeless and pale is the ghost, seeking life and warmth in my hallow veins Consumption has long since begun Drought do not stangle Blinded by the blindfold Rain floods my cracking flesh In the rainclouds I see my spirit, stumbling towards the pyre Through the night I feel the vampires, beating down the walls of my being Fire churning and burning Let my uncontrolable cries awaken the deaf man |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Umm...I just wanted to add something... Other people know that I write poetry. Other people know that my emotions are very important to me. But nobody cares enough to even ask to read them...to care about what it is that I'm thinking or feeling... These people are my friends and my family and yet...I have complete strangers reading my thoughts and seeming to care more than they do. I'm not much the type to get openly sentimental with people...believe it or not...but I wanted to thank you. Cuz even sometimes my own words hold no comfort. And unfortunately other than here I have no place else to find it. You listen...and that's what nobody else does for me so I am eternally greatful. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Dark-- I like what you said after the wonderful poem you wrote...deep in many ways....especially after what u said in the post...... I thank who ever started this site and all the people who want to listen!!! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you Bojopy....and yes, I think we all should give thanks to the creator of this wonderful site because it has done more than just allow us to listen...it allows us to connect. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
DE- Your words hold so much power. I don't know how the people in your life overlook it. And I'm in complete agreement with both you bojopy. This place has become my comfort . And I am also grateful. I come here to listen and be heard. So, you're welcome and thank you too. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you very much danni. It's upsetting to me that they never care enough to ask...but then again maybe it's my fault too....Maybe I've become far too distant for their taste...and maybe it's the darkness and truth behind my words that frighten them. Who knows...but anyway... Thank you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
First let me say, this is so very good. Emotions are shining through it. I can remember when I first started writing many years ago! My family would say,"What,You wrote this?" Still, to this day my Mother thinks I waste my time. Keep writing and we'll all keep reading  Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you very much jenny...I always look forward to hearing from you. I started writing when I was 13..which was sometime last year during my little depressionist psycho trip and obviously I didn't stop. I'm glad you still write jenny and I hope you continue to cuz it is never a waste of time. |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
I understand how you feel, my family is the same way. I was grateful to find a place that not only accepted my writings, but me as well. The people here are the only ones who see what I write. It's nice to see other people who understand. I really enjoyed the depth of your poem. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you Niemczak...and I agree with you..it's nice to know that someone will always understand and accept us as we are and not expect us to change. |
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