Dark Poetry #1 |
Her Fantasy |
FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Awake... you have a part to play It belongs to another’s day She will see you as she chooses As it’s played, no one loses You may be the one that suits her But you cannot be the suitor It’s her turn to rule this world today Your time will come, another way The set today... maybe the park Or if she chooses... you’ll revel in the dark Her consciousness constructs the scene Images... beautiful... clear... serene... Emotional responses design the plot Directing movement... in control, I’m not This... her fantasy... I have nothing to say Until tomorrow... when she will have a part to play There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Marvellous FreeByrd I can surely relate to this one. I love how she has gathered her strength and then watch it!! Bravo At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Incredible! I liked this one very much. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
As always R, your work is extraordinary and shines.A Most excellent piece. Glad to be here to read it Jenny< !signature--> Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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