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Dark Poetry #1

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Kari16
New Member

since 1999-12-30

Posts 7
nebraska

0 posted 1999-12-30 02:40 PM

Darkness

She looks and she waits for the time to near,
it is tempting and vamp and scary too.
Alone and waiting, she shows a little fear.

Trying to find what is very dear,
searching and searching to find what it true,
She looks and she waits for time to near.

Looking from afar, she sheds a little tear,
if emotions were colors, she’d be blue.
Alone and waiting, she shows a little fear.

Hoping and hoping, she does not want to hear,
what brings her sadness and madness too.
She looks and she waits for the time to near.

Lying there afraid of what is soon to near,
she looks and finds that it is not so true.
Alone and waiting, she shows a little fear.

She looks and she finds, but it’s not clear,
but still, with loneliness, she has no clue.
She looks and she waits for the time to near,
Alone and waiting, she shows a little fear.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 1999-12-30 04:06 PM

This is very good. . .

You can feel the fear that the person in the poem feels. . .

Looking forward to hearing more from you. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-30 06:43 PM

I too felt the fear well done, eagerly awaiting some more!!

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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