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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 1999-12-20 01:14 PM

My face can hide the feelings that
     I don't want to show
A smile when I'm happy
                      a frown when I'm sad.
A smirk that says when I don't know
                      a snarl when I'm mad.

But in my eyes shines the love in my heart
The love that I can never reveal
In my eyes she might see that love
The love for you that I now feel.

I don't look into her eyes anymore
Those simmering pools of blue
I'm afraid that instead of love for her
She'll see the love I have for you.

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-20 01:17 PM

awww... you've found another love but can't tell the former..although i've never been in this situation, you described it perfectly, and i can see how you might be feeling...nice work

ashley

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 1999-12-20 05:02 PM

Please excuse my negativity and ignorance but..love sucks. It really does. Oke, enough with being a child, I think you did an excellent job on this and you described it very, very well. I wish I had some words of wisdom but I don't know enough to be of any use...or anything that won't sound silly or superficial..but I hope it works out for you.

Great job.

~*Dark Enchantress*~

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 1999-12-20 05:38 PM

"Those simmering pools of blue..."
Love it.

JOY

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-20 10:33 PM

No.1 isn't she unlucky doesn't realise what a wonderful guy she's losing..
No.2 she is the lucky one

Lovely poem Sven

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

5 posted 1999-12-21 12:58 PM

You can tell a great deal by looking someone in the eye -- especially if that person is hiding something from you. Good thoughts, good poetry and a true statement besides.

--Kess

You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 1999-12-21 07:55 AM

Well, I certainly wouldn't want to be in your shoes...tried that once before. Very well done though, I can certainly relate.

Michael

Fairy Colours
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US

7 posted 1999-12-21 08:56 AM

OOOOH... I'm scared of you

Just don't get caught, it could be messy. But anyways great poem.

--A Little Fairy--

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