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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
I don't know if this will be alowwed to go up, but I wrote this when I was filled with alot of pain and I did not know what to do. I can feel it now as it touches my arm. The blade that I use to end my days filled with pain and misery. Lightly touching, gently caressing I begin to press Upon my face tears being to fall from the pain that I have caused and the sorrow felt by all. I begin to press, I can feel the end now. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I think It just scrapes through!!  Hi welcome to the dark forum my friend. Seems to me you fit right in, nothing too graphic and it'll be fine. Glad to see you wondered though. We've all been there, I have never actually held a knife though Looking forward to your next post.. What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I can understand this feeling. I have had my share of dealings with this subject. It is such a lonely place to be. I hope things start looking up for you. btw, good poem and WELCOME!  |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Niemczak-- Sounds like everyone goes through this stage when they are sixteen, i am sixteen myself and i have wondered what it would be like to end it all, but i've realized that nothing is worth killing yourself over...i hope you feel the same way Welcome!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome my friend. . . Here you will find a home. . . very good. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
I think ur topic was great and keep up the good workEverything Dies |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
JD I've gotta say this that graphic is horrible!! What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I'm 16, and I've been there..exellent work, welcome! And I must say, that is one spooky graphic.. *Krista Knutson* ~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~ |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
That was me thirteen years ago. I never really looked back and thought about what I was truly thinking then. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
It is ironic, I think, that we ponder most on death when we have our whole lives ahead of us ... This was tastefully done; not graphic at all. Leaves the end open to interpretation. --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
It's been a long time since I was sixteen. In my years hanging around here, I have learned one thing. Death is just an end to this time around. There are a lot of things you have to learn, be it in this life or the next. No use in cutting it short. Good work. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I think many of us have felt this way at time... Isis, is right, this "squeaks" through, but I am seriously more concerned with your well being at this point than judging your poem. If there is anything at all you feel you need to talk about, please know you always have friends in Isis and myself you can reach out to, I hope things get brighter for you soon. Michael |
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