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Give Me The Dance....
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Give Me The Dance.... |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Give me the dance of the happy Swirling and twirling around Laughing with rythm to the beat in the step Give me the dance of the happy Give me the dance of the morose Sadness made present with every move A hand twisting arm comming slowly down Like eternity passing Give me the dance of the morose Give me the dance of the furious Wild pounding of feet upon the pavement Anger penetrating through every limb Give me the dance of the furious Give me the dance of the emotions That go through human kind every day That shudder the soul and feed the hungry heart Give me the dance of the emotions JOY |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Joy! Such beautiful words. . . love is a lot like a dance isn't it? But sometimes, the steps can be a little hard to learn. . . Very nice. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Joy, this is wonderful a beautiful dance we have every day of our lives, the days we don't you feel like something is missing... Bravo this was inspired  What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Enjoyed the read very much Joy... The last line nailed the entire piece!!!! Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Wonderful poem Joy. I think we all have had these dances with life. It can be so tiring and invigorating at the same time. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I think that sometimes life should leave out sadness and angryness but only encorporate them when they teach lessions to us...its just my thoughts, btw great poem! |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thank you so much for your nice replies! JOY |
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