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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-12-15 05:30 AM

Vengeance breeds contempt under blood-red skies.
Vultures glide and fight with carrion crows.
Peace comes to Man clad in Hell's own disguise.
Blindly does Man sow the seeds of his woes.

Vultures glide and fight with carrion crows.
The children's blood pays the wages of war.
Blindly does Man sow the seeds of his woes.
Soldiers fight not knowing what they die for.

The children's blood pays the wages of war.
Rampant technology broke from Man's grip.
Soldiers fight not knowing what they die for.
From the womb did technology's child rip.

Rampant technology broke from Man's grip.
The future of hope no God could divine.
From the womb did technology's child rip.
The arrogance of Man is Nature's shrine.

The future of hope no God could divine.
In the name of peace new horrors were born.
The arrogance of Man is Nature's shrine.
Between moralities Mankind was torn.

In the name of peace new horrors were born.
Peace comes to Man clad in Hell's own disguise.
Between moralities Mankind was torn.
Vengeance breeds contempt under blood-red skies.

©1999 DreamEvil

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 1999-12-15 12:00 PM

Incredible! Such powerful views matched with very strong words. It has rendered me speechless. Great work !

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

2 posted 1999-12-15 01:36 PM

I love how this poem is formatted. Set up wickedly while delivering strong mental pictures. I simply love it.

Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall==

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-12-15 07:21 PM

This piece is like a vortex

Liked very much my friend....

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-15 11:22 PM

Chilling in it's truthfulness DE

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

5 posted 1999-12-15 11:41 PM

Powerful prose. Thank you.

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