Dark Poetry #1 |
Imprisoned Chld |
startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Imprisoned Child Deep in the caverns of the mind Are the stories of the past Some wonderful some that aren’t Time should have erased them A trip inside of someone’s mind Can be a treacherous journey One of horrors and pain That shocks the senses The deeper you delve Into the depths of the mind The more dark and sinister The stories that remain Locked inside and away From those who judge Are the pains and sorrows That creates mental fog Fallacy and heartache abound Discovery of the inner child Sets all the demons loose That paralyze the spirit. Locked away so deep inside Struggling to saw through bars The imprisoned child struggles Against a self-imposed jailer. Courage is the price that life exacts for granting peace with yourself. --Amelia Earhart |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This was magic The fifth stanza music to my soul Bravo!! You should be mighty pleased with this one!! What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I wish I'd written this! Excellent work. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Shawn, Your words ***Discovery of the inner child Sets all the demons loose That paralyze the spirit Speak to where you are going,.... Get the key, open the door, and stop the paralysis! You have got it in you! BRAVO! I can read your wheels spinning...continue the process, my friend, continue the process! I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Dear friend, this should be in "New Beginnings" if there was such a thing, not Dark Passions..... You are coming out of the dark, that little child does not have to reside in the shadows anymore..... I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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