Rage - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #1

Rage

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 1999-12-13 06:48 AM

Inside is burning
Into the fire
Hate and Fear
Right sacrificed
For driveing pain

Oh how we hurt
When jealous
Or spurned
Can we take
all we hurl

Rage inside us
Tornado power
Tears all near
with untamed
Unadulterated pain

Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-12-13 08:46 PM

Verse 2 sums it all up for me.

Good one Walter

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-13 10:23 PM

Verse 3 does it for me. Another beauty Walter!!

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

~Red~
Junior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.

3 posted 1999-12-13 10:24 PM

Well, i think it's all good!....good job!

~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.