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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-12-12 01:48 PM


Scars from birth thought to never diminish,
Have dissapeared without trace.

Broken torn and shattered heart of hate,
Now mended and sewn with love.

Sliced body was my canvass for the knife,
The only canvass now is life.

Though I still hate,
I no longer hate myself.


 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 1999-12-12 03:17 PM


Very powerful piece SD. It is wonderful to know you have healed. May things keep getting better.  
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-12 05:39 PM


With love in your heart and soul SD inner happiness is only a hearbeat away!!  
Loved this poem from despair to happiness  


 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


~Red~
Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.
3 posted 1999-12-12 11:53 PM


Wow! i'm sortta kinda feeling the way u did, i wish it could get better, i wish i could heal,..but i'm very gald that you did! nice poem!  

 ~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-12-13 04:56 PM


Thanx danni isis and red I really appriciate your guy's words it really makes me happy to know people care about a person like me  

 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-12-13 08:11 PM


NOW MENDED AND SEWN WITH LOVE  


Good one Tom...
and I too love you to pieces  


Jenny


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



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