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The Inside Track
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The Inside Track |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The Inside Track I see your life lines and can read them boldly sitting here in junction as some screaming newspaper headline grabbing and snatching the middle of my very soul you somehow think the tracks have disappeared and stopped but the journey is not ended the train halted to let someone else off to the point where they needed to be your fires cook hot – look and iron is fixed fused to ties that are unchangeable and unmovable a path cut deep across the graveling stay tight within these grooves as you pass over the evidence in the metal you now trace watch closely to see the switch where the light at the end finds their true rails as the engineer |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, this was a great poem!  |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I enjoyed the analogy and the images the words provided. I am still not sure exactly what you mean here, but I have some ideas. Well written. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
you've always been amazing.. I wanted to take the lifelines and bend them |
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