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Open Poetry #32

The Proprieties of Spring

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2004-05-06 04:05 PM

The Proprieties of Spring

"Class, I trust you appreciate that
'Gosh! You smell great!' is inappropriate
address, particularly when directed
towards someone you've just met.
It smacks of the barnyard
or perhaps .........
a garden setting?

RMW

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-05-06 04:07 PM

But Sir, Sir [

] isn't it all

in the delivery?

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2004-05-06 04:09 PM

Sunshine. I'll have to ask my sons. They are the pitchers. Bob

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-05-06 04:11 PM

Oh I don't know...it sounded fine here!
Cute write.
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-05-06 05:37 PM

Sounds good to me!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-06 05:50 PM

It's perfectly clear to me.

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

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