The American poet - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #32

The American poet

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-05-06 12:05 PM

Freedom from what we start
Coming from a perfect one
With a heart as gold as art
Coming down, the shades are low
Glow, become one above
Far arise, be crystallized
Home away from home
Alone, go, be gone away
Guilty from Mr. One Within
Great, as long as the sound performs
Trials of yesterday echo in my head
Gone to be my one love
A line of leafs of foreign green
One love above one
Rocking with Mr. Risin’, one within
Down at the Go Go we talked
Talked about art, the heart, and the end
Come to me in the city of life
Soared away by the moonlight drive
Crammed, is one so deep?
Crying away our sins of yesterday
No, no get away they’ll never go

Andrew A.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2004-05-19 02:00 AM

a hell of a title. interesting poem but somewhat disconnected.

-majnu
--------------------------------------
Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-05-19 09:04 AM

Seems like scattered lines of thought.
I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

3 posted 2004-07-17 08:59 PM

It's dedicated to a certain poet. I'll let you guess who it is (There are clues within the art)

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.