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Seventeen Miles From Manhattan
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Seventeen Miles From Manhattan |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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moon full of wishes earth of quiet promises roots shake the long sleep soft desperation companion for the ages so painful the need fear bright awareness cold gestures of endearment oxygen's useless ©2004 by icebox |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a painful write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting title, Icebox... and a hunger unrequited. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"so painful the need" At times...yes. Now remember what I lost before? I lost it again....  help..."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so powerfully written...thank you for sharing. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sort of that feeling you get when you know...and at the same time know |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox I like oxymorons...like your name and your heart.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a deeply moving piece this is. I can interpret this at least three ways and just keep reading it to arrive at my own truth. Here is a warm gesture.... |
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