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Open Poetry #32

That you would hold me

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-05-05 10:34 AM

That you would hold me
Take my hand beside the stream
See within my deepest grieving
Turn it all into another dream

More than friendship will discover
What secrets our eyes have kept
To still the hand that trembles
Joy issues from where once was wept

Voices soft in the sharing
A minute without is far too long
Taste the sweet heat of longing
Given in to a bond that is strong

No harm will come to you in this way
Angel arms will comfort with a smile
A warm breath on lips of love
That was there all the while

That you would hold me
Heal all the torment I describe
Smooth the aching waters
Of the endless ocean inside

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-05-05 10:50 AM

This is silky smooth, Jerry...
a lovely read. Thank you!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-05-05 11:01 AM

Truly lovely write.
TD

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

3 posted 2004-05-05 11:03 AM

Thanks Sun and TD. I guess I just had to write another one...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-05-05 12:56 PM

Voices soft in the sharing
A minute without is far too long
Taste the sweet heat of longing
Given in to a bond that is strong

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-05 01:36 PM

Oh this is SO lovely...
Thank you for the keeper.
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-05-06 12:19 PM

Nice writing...James

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-05-06 02:48 AM

very pretty piece

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06

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Boise Idaho

8 posted 2004-05-06 03:05 AM

An amazing poem well written and flows wonderfully...I enjoyed it very much great job

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Lost Awhile
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since 2004-05-06

Posts 17
UK

9 posted 2004-05-06 04:05 AM

Nice writing. I hope that you got what you needed.

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