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Amature2
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0 posted 2004-04-14 08:13 PM



Turmoil

Landslide, avalanche
Are undistinguishable
When caught up in them

"Everybody's lost
But they're pretending they're not
Lost"........Morrissey

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-04-14 08:24 PM


Excellent metaphor... a delight to read!
iliana
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2 posted 2004-04-14 08:32 PM


Never thought about it, but you are absolutely right!  Good one!
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-04-14 09:10 PM


Ain't that the truth!

It's hard to know which way is up when you're tossed about in discombulating turmoil!

Peace & Harmony,
EA

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2004-04-14 09:31 PM


Truth be told in these words
(Smiling here) Seems my lifes caught up in one or another on a daily basis anymore

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-04-15 02:06 AM


so true...so true

great little piece

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