Open Poetry #32 |
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May 2nd. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
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Superb sun shines shimmering, shadows slope along the ground, from tall willows, emerald hued. Birdsong echos and uplifts spirits. Delight is all around, the day fair. White flowers miniature and delicate. Herby aroma of wild garlic on the wind. Orange tip butterfies and treecreepers. The river, she sits motionless, reflections of willow on her film. Under her banks, old logs and new buds, she is dressed in newly flowered garlands. Opening gates, crossing styles, weather beaten, but smooth, from the touch of walkers hands. Just sitting, watching from shadows. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you do depict some of the loveliest scenes ive ever read ![]() |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
lovelier still is the beauty I see in your heart...and when you write of such a scene, I can walk into the garden of your heart and imagine this and share it with you...this is what comes to mind when I think of you....beauty..sunshine..nature..love.. ![]() Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Muted ..thank you for your very kind words..much appreciated... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
ARH my heart can feel the sweetness of love..and i am able to create things of beauty because of it....love gives me that ability..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is SO beautiful...lovely lovely images. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Phil Your words always paint such a beautiful picture and this was truly lovely. I hope all is well with you. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enchantress...thank you SO much for your very kind words...GR... Sue....yes i am fine...thank you for your very kind words too....GR... ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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