Open Poetry #32 |
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Up on Black Jack Mountain |
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since 2000-04-11
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No one spoke of the house, where people never came or went. On Black Jack mountain, where nothing ever happened things were normal and serine. But up on top recessed back into the woods of Ol’ Black Jack set that house accessed only by a narrow path that cut through the underbrush, where people never came or went. There in the run down shadow of the former house existed a man who never lived. The dead man sat in his rocking chair condemned by no one, but himself. Raging against the on-setting senility, and anyone else who had influence or control over his cognitive abilities, he lashed out in his mind all while sitting in his rocking chair in this place where time did not pass and the dead never truly… died. Up on Ol’ black Jack Mountain things had a way of staying the same. Nothing here had changed much in the last century. You see memories fade slowly, they linger around floating like ghost. and up on Black Jack Mountain, they live in the woods waiting for for some one to forget. The rest of the world may have moved on, but these people, these people here on Ol’ Black Jack have regrets, and none of them more than the old man who set in his rocking chair at the house back in the woods, where the dead up and walked, and the rest of us never came nor went. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wes~ I just love the all of this~ A wonderful, wonderful poem story~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce writing...James |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Aww shucks you guys, thanks. |
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