Open Poetry #32 |
Poem Inspied By Michaels Painting |
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A nor-easter is up; Crashing great swells Against rock and reef, Yet the captain must stay His place at the wheel Invisible, alone With the taunts of his fear, Guiding the ship Of his spirit and soul, Through the turbulent mood of the sea. * Storm winds bay in sails, Close behind, above, below Wails and whips the sea to froth, Though note the glint of hope On top, on main and wake. * What frosts the clouds is the captains goal, For where sun shines, there is peace and calm; Safe harbor for the spirit, and the soul. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Well done I'm sure he will enjoy it. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, I agree, very well done and staying the course, he will indeed be pleased. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ford, this is wonderful...perhaps we could get Michaels's painting back up here for this one ya think? And, please be sure to send him the link. Very well done m'friend. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written, Ice. I know Michael will be please to read this and proud. believe in what your heart feels... |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wow!!!! Beautiful my friend. Nice read this morning. :-) See you tomorrow night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice - Michael will so enjoy this! hugs,Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is wonderful, Ford! Thank you so much. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
an outstanding write, inspired by an outstanding painting; both works of art created by outstanding passionate artists |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Okay, where are the paintings?? "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words bring to life the painting of which you speak...this is stunningly beautiful... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is awesome...I'm sure that he will love what he has inspired beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Until we can get one up for all to see... here is the link to Michael's beautiful painting... http://members.tripod.com/~augustfire/index.html Once again, thank you Ford, you did great with this one! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I shall forward this to Michael he will be absolutely thrilled! What a lovely poem! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What a wonderful writing depicting this beautiful painting by two wonderful artists. You have painted with your words what his brush has painted with each stroke. Magnificent. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow...I wish I could write something as beautiful as this..I even heard the speaker's voice. Excellent imagery. Michael is going to love this. I'm keeping it Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really enjoyed this, Ice! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ford, I've read this several times... Still haven't quite figured out how to respond... so I'll just say thank you. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You're all much too kind. Thank you in the most sincere way. Ice, thank you as well. You're very kind. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to be inspired...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am touched by the beauty of your write, dear Ford. While the heart like the ship can experience tremendous storms, the soul is always calm as it is always anchored in the safe harbour of God's love. Michael Auguste good to see you here! Your painting is a powerful expression of your innermost emotions. I love it. You sail above stormy waters, but you know that calmness will reign again. Love to both. Margherita |
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