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Ache
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Ache |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
A shiver runs down my spine Skin ripples below the surface As blood boils in quickened haste Breathing slows to shallow pulse Come, heal this ache A tremble takes hold of me Clear in its sublime context A flush red warmth on my face Eyes dilated in pupil scream Come, feel this ache A nervous fear takes control Closer now to the touch My heart overloaded, begins to break I cannot survive the rush Come, heal this ache |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A prayer a mantra... lovely, PK...very emotional pleading... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There are times when words take hold and shake the inner caverns... You have written of these times. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is a time, when one must realize that he is not or never alone, in that enjoying the company he keeps....in your words I see strength coming...very emotionally charged! Thank you for writing and sharing. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"My heart overloaded, begins to break" know the feeling  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You can really feel the ache in this. Enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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