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Open Poetry #32

Process Of Pain

Annie Shadow
Junior Member

since 2004-05-02

Posts 27
Drifting

0 posted 2004-05-04 12:11 PM

First it was just hours
Fresh and not yet healed
Lost in self-denial
From this fate that had been sealed
And then it turned to days
That never seemed to end
Chasing off the comfort
That my conscience tried to send
And then it turned to weeks
Time had lost control
Running quickly nowhere
A nightmare in my soul
Then weeks turned into months
As pain began to mount
With no way to retreat
And tears too great to count
But months turned into years
And with it numbed the pain...
'Cause clouds can only stay so long
Before there's no more rain

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-04 12:19 PM

nicely done...I know what you write of here. Love those ending lines!

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2004-05-04 12:47 PM

Loved the pacing and rhythm of this one. And I like the theme too. Very good.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2004-05-04 03:16 PM

i really enjoyed this one.

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