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Forever.(Haiku)
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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How long will the sunshine?...Forever... How long does love last?....Forever... How long will i love thee?...Forever.... ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
phil...haiku is 5-7-5 format 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the last this has potential though |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Forever and ever...etertity...infinity...like a circle that has no end...continious... Forever!  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Dixie that is why i dont do many haiku's...no good at em..LOL..thanks for the advice... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Yes love does last forever..as the continuous circle....love is the answer to life's ills...thank you very much ARH.... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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