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Rainy Gray
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Rainy Gray |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rainy Gray ~*Marge Tindal*~ Softly in puddles of teardrops now in scatter ‘Cross a broken morn this rainy pour now matters Splashing through gray memories~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
'Teardops now in scatter' Such beautiful yet sad words here Marge. Much enjoyed your words as always. Hugs~
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Marge, how are you today...beautiful write... Its raining here again...down to 38 tonight, will summer ever arrive and stay for awhile? Love to you Lee J. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I know this feeling... know it well. I hope things are alright with you dear Marge  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
An unusually sad offering. You do seem to pack in the meaning with so few words. Thanks for the read. INclan |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: You have really caught the mood of a rainy day with this one. I never think about it raining in Florida!! Always think of the sun shining there! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Softly in puddles of teardrops now in scatter ‘Cross a broken morn this rainy pour now matters Splashing through gray memories~ Every line, perfect! *hugs* ~Tier |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
YES!!! Marge you still ROCK! The imagery in your poetry never ceases to amze me, keep 'em coming sweetie  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Each storm and rainy gray provide their own reasons, don't they Marge? Feather soft. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you for sharing such wonderful images through your words, Marge. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marge, a melancholic moment, but so very beautifully expressed. Makes me want to hug you. Hugs and love, Margherita  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
grey has its own beauty and you've captured it...hoping for you the sadness passes quickly |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was thinking of you this morning... the moonset was rivaling the sunrise in beauty... and still, this is the perfect poem for my day. *S* Lovely work! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A great write... INDEED ... Regards, Sudhir |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is sad but so pretty. Love ya, Betty |
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