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jonmcm
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0 posted 2004-05-03 11:54 AM



As we have watched together time go by,
all that we wished for, hoped for, longed for,
is one step nearer to becoming our today.
Though sure we will always be friends,
let us hold onto the hope of being just One.
Let's tread the road determined in our stride,
with footprints pointing as arrows, expertly poised,
to hit the target of our shared tomorrows.

© Copyright 2004 Jonathan McMahon - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-03 12:33 PM


nice journey to come
Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-05-03 12:36 PM


Very nicely penned Jonathan..much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~


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3 posted 2004-05-16 11:28 AM


very lovely

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

Suetang
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4 posted 2004-05-20 01:19 AM


Hi Jonathan

This was a beautiful piece of writing, much enjoyed.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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