Open Poetry #32 |
The Blind of You |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Blind of You You took me in a blinding coop That stays my heart a residue And caught me in your let of soul That ghosts upon my Islands shoal And ever since it’s been my bliss The trance that came with your fist kiss Those fantasies that once took hold Have never left the fires cold And now my world is near unseat My children leave my nest complete And I am left with renders think With tenderness but on the brink What better time could I sew? What better time could I know? And though an age is passing bye I feel some how it’s not goodbye. Osmotic is forever’s past With eternity as the last |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice poetry And a touching tribute to love Gloom |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A very romantic write, Sy. Good morning. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely romantic offering from you this bright Monday morn Sy! Very much enjoyed the read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And now my world is near unseat My children leave my nest complete And I am left with renders think With tenderness but on the brink ================================ well....I would read you till I go blind...does that count. lol Love the tenderness of this write Sy-babes. *ww* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mornin', Seymour! This is tenderness, at it's best! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's never goodbye |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So that's how it's done! I never knew... Ah Sy...so good to read you. Three days without Sypoetry and I get a little frantic! Now, to dig up Saturday's and Sunday's! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"And ever since it’s been my bliss The trance that came with your first kiss Those fantasies that once took hold Have never left the fires cold" I knew a girl like that... Cool write Sy!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Another excvellent write, Sy |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And ever since it’s been my bliss The trance that came with your fist kiss Those fantasies that once took hold Have never left the fires cold Beautiful, Seymour....just how I feel. Hugs, Ethel |
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