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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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something beautiful about the yellow in stars that may not be touched 150404 Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A beautiful poem!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love this!! Not one wasted word in the bunch. Geesh, I miss you guys |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, I know what you mean. The pure, untouched delicate yellow of the stars! ~ One of my favourite colours.  EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree So simple, yet so complex. I love this! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect !! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
that which can't be touched by the heavy hands of man remains beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel Well done enjoyed the read. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Lovely, Darksis...seen this way. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very beautiful |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
the thing is, they twinkle, as if they are trying to reach us.. maybe we are beautiful as well... and I loved this little gem..loved it.. pretty pretty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never thought of that before...but yeah |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Now, are you saying that the something beautiful in stars can't be touched? Or the yellow?  K |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The foreground and the background....each utterly true. You have real depth, and it shows in this deceptively simple poem. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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