Open Poetry #32 |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
If I were but a piece of tape, ...I'd stick myself to you, To bond myself to you forever, ...is just what I would do. Not on your hands or feet to bind, ...nor on sweet lips to hush, Not on your eyes to blur your vision, ...nor on your soul to crush, Instead, I'd seek the warmth of breast, ...to touch upon your heart, To evermore be one with you, ...our love would never part. Transparent I, so you could see, ...into my heart as well, Our love's as one forevermore, ...as I near you would dwell, Each instant of the day and night, ...you'd feel that I was near, Free to live your life, but yet, ...I'd be there for each tear. If I were but a piece of tape, ...I'd stick 'til time was done, Upon your breast, near beating heart, ...so forever we'd be one. I told one of the secretaries you could write a poem about anything, she said then write a love poem about a piece of tape... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim You did it too...and so well!! I'm glad you stuck to it... I'm sure this will make her smile. It did me! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And you did it beautifully...much enjoyed the read Tim. Hugs~
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh yes...you are so very right. The lines here were very sweet. TD |
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Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
Wow, this is really sweet. Also, it was very clever and well done. I enjoyed it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
you're a true romantic. Corinne |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Tape works for me... ![]() ~ARH ![]() Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful, Tim! I belive, maybe you could write about anything! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...and so you did! Well done Sir! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I am stuck on Scotch Tape, and Scotch Tape's stuck on me... um.. Something like that... I like yours JUST a bit better, sir bard... ![]() |
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