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You were the Ocean
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You were the Ocean |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is outstanding, summoning and fully captivating. So, so beautiful. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow! Shine me a shore! I wondered about "Erin" and the dictionary told me that it is the poetic name for Ireland. Incredible work of art. Always we are searching ... Much enjoyed! Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Parker..this is amazing!! How beautiful the words and picture! Keeping this one I am. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, it's great to see a post from you again, Park. Have missed that special voice, that hypnotic melody calling to far away shores. Corinne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Parker...So good to see you! What beauty you have left us today! Thank you.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
OMG! This is gorgeous! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"The night, like the unchanging sea so faithful in its hollow core" What wondrous images you portray THis is truly exquisite Liz |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! I have missed your words of inspiration... You are as deep as the ocean, as wide as the sea.... I love the photo you have taken...just breathless...a beautiful setting, draws me inside, as if I was sitting on the boat with you! Your poety is as unique, more beautiful than it has ever been! ~Love and Hugs ~ARH   Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Parker, again I am impressed with the beauty in your poetry and your heart. I have missed you dear friend. D xo Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
P-man this is indeed stunning...in both expression and presentation. The only thing missing is your voice reading it to us. Love the angsty, haunting mood of this... the conflict...the imagery...the ache... you always did these dramatic, emotive, writes justice. Good to read you again groovy guy. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hello Handsome, I can't see anything, just a blue empty box  no poetry...  nothing....whaaa happen??? email it to me???  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
My mouth is agape. This is a beautiful poem, full of heartache. The picture is perfect, and the font complements both of them. This is professional quality. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my, Parker, this is sooo beautiful. I'm keeping it, too!! That is, if it's okay. Hugs, Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello James Your words drew me in from beginning to end and the picture was absolutely stunning. A very inspirational piece of writing which was so very much enjoyed. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parker, the image unfolded slowly, almost line by line...a beautiful presentation, one of your best, ever! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I knew I had been missing something...and there you are. So beautiful |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL, now i can see it on here!! After you sent it to me I don't know what was wrong before, I waited and waited too....anyway, just glad I got to read it |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
so touching, deeply beautiful |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Impressive...hauntingly beautiful.....well done...thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Just like to thank everyone for responding. I've been away from this warm place too too long. My muse has stepped out for too long.  Those requesting a copy of this image, be my guest. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
show off... lol you know I'm kidding Love this! Presentation and all!Have missed hanging around in the blue reading great poetry! Parker poetry is such awesome poetry!! Drop a line sometime? hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So glad to have the opportunity to read this again Parker. What an extraordinary write! TD |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is excellent piece, the sort of poem you experience instead of just reading. You made my day with this one Parker. Michael |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, sure i'll drop you a line, sign on sometime. td, thanks for the reread, images can help these poems, I thank a dear friend for the great pic selection. Micheal, always glad to see your replys as well as your great poetry. Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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