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exhale
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0 posted 2004-05-02 03:16 AM


breathing life through a car door window
with nothing but my heart in my pocket
and my soul in hand

i'll find you

is it alright if i call you soulmate
your out there somewhere
i can feel it
pulsing through my veins
every heartbeat

don't stop breathing
don't let your heart stop beating

i might just walk past you


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-02 05:27 AM


keep your eyes and ears open, and keep the faith! great write!
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2004-05-02 06:48 AM


Very beautiful!
You have launched the challenge ...
Love, Margherita

Beki
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3 posted 2004-05-02 11:27 PM


yes...I can feel this one....
Ambee
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since 2004-05-03
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4 posted 2004-05-03 01:13 AM


I love the beginning of this... The images are just great. The end falls off a bit, but you definitely have something here...
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-05-03 01:46 AM


Many seek a soulmate...or at least compatability...James
Aenimal
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6 posted 2004-05-03 01:35 PM


very nice, and good luck
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7 posted 2004-06-09 05:17 PM


There are two kinds of soulmate....and one should be avoided at all cost....be sure which you've found.

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