Open Poetry #32 |
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Soulmate. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada ![]() |
breathing life through a car door window with nothing but my heart in my pocket and my soul in hand i'll find you is it alright if i call you soulmate your out there somewhere i can feel it pulsing through my veins every heartbeat don't stop breathing don't let your heart stop beating i might just walk past you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keep your eyes and ears open, and keep the faith! great write! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful! You have launched the challenge ... Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
yes...I can feel this one.... |
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Ambee New Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 5 |
I love the beginning of this... The images are just great. The end falls off a bit, but you definitely have something here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Many seek a soulmate...or at least compatability...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
very nice, and good luck |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There are two kinds of soulmate....and one should be avoided at all cost....be sure which you've found. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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