Open Poetry #32 |
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I Lost A Day Around Here Someplace |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
Softly staring into darkness, moon and stars not strong enough by half to tear the shadow seals on sleep tonight; I am no one's hero when I'm staring down my demons, we just share awareness of each other's points of weakness. I really have to try to sleep, to keep a steady hand at dawn, today nothing seemed to work and before I noticed, the day was gone. ©2004 by icebox |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IceBox~ Oh man ... I SO understand this one~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox....some days are like that I know. ![]() Wishing you a good nights sleep, sweet dreams and a better day tomorrow. |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I thought it was only my luck to have such days. We have much in common, you and I. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"we just share awareness of each other's points of weakness." Your take on things is always so profound. Hope you get some rest. ![]() |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Icebox, it seems as if we both have a sleep problem. It's like we want to know what truly happens when we sleep but being awake, of course, doesn't enable that to be. Losing a day somewhere sounds like a good idea. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heroes never see themselves as heroes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
to keep a steady hand at dawn GREAT! Though I do fall asleep, I often have the feeling of days slipping by, not fully LIVED. Life is so full of challenges, that you should see yourself as a hero, you are a thinker and you KNOW. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you all for taking time to read this and for your generous comments. Writing poetry often helps me to focus my mind (what little may be left of it), but this change of season has me all fragmented. It is nice to know I am not alone. ![]() |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I had too many days in the past that slipped away doing the same thing over and over...and hating it. I don't do that anymore and stopped aging at the same time... Every day is spring. Get some sleep. Then take a drive by the river. ![]() "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nodding here.. Some days just fly by so quickly. Get some rest...things look better in the morning. Hugs~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
been there.. your great!! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"I am no one's hero when I'm staring down my demons" A days work all by itself...Yep! I understand. |
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