Open Poetry #32 |
Carnival Twist of the Mind |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Carnival Twist of the Mind Rio is beating it’s miracle drums Through the carnival streets of delight The beaches are quivering to magical strums Along glimmering diamonds of night It’s the rhythm of life, it’s the rhythm of love It’s the back and forth roll of the sea It’s the up from below, and the down from above It’s the love that was never to be Drum me a heartbeat, strum me a dance I know my fate but I’ll still take a chance Tonight love will come in a fiery glance The samba is waking to slithering hips It’s the sleek painted lady of dance She moves like a serpent with ruby red lips It’s a carnival night of romance Illusions of ecstasy turn into bliss And are leaving all troubles behind But love doesn’t bloom on a night such as this It’s a carnival twist of the mind Drum me a samba, strum me a beat Life of the living is down in your feet Not dancing tonight is accepting defeat It’s the rhythm of life, it’s the rhythm of love It’s the back and forth roll of the sea It’s the up from below, and the down from above It’s the love that was never to be Elizabeth Santos |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This one has a music all its own! Beautifully done, Elizabeth! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz You've got me moving...I love to dance. Your poem was like music that I could dance to. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious...just precious |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I always love your words, Liz, but this one was an echo of my heartbeat. tapping my toes here... |
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