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Open Poetry #32

Transparent (For Sylvia Plath)

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-05-01 04:21 AM

Dark, so dark,
as the world without a moon,
May without June,

I choose to see light,
feeding my path,
with a silver spoon,

Darkness is your weapon,
using it,
you blind me,

Beliveing, trusting,
decieveing, lusting,
my blackened eyes no longer see,

All becomes apparent,
as truth, I see now,
see you, transparent,

I now know who you are,
You, I see,
no hiding, no pretending,
no defending, reality,

My eyes hurt at the sight of you,
black demon heart drips,
with evil blood, flowing
rampant,

Hide not yourself,
I see within the light of truth,
your blackened heart becomes transparent.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-01 04:51 AM

amazing write here RH

strange how much you see when things become clear

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2004-05-01 05:43 AM

I used eyedrops to get the red out..LOL!

Thanks!
~LOVE AND HUGS
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2004-05-01 06:02 AM

Very fine writing...full of heated thoughts...she was a very passionate person...she would have liked your passion here...thank you...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-05-01 06:16 AM

Thank You Gold...that is the best compliment I could receive to this poem...

Love and Hugs
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2004-05-02 07:33 AM

Wow, shivers of delight here, for you captured the spirit of Sylvia Plath so perfectly and gave her this gift of transparency.
Wonderful ARH!
Love, Margherita

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