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Ronald (for my husband)
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Ronald (for my husband) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Ronald, My love, my dear My very heart Come stand by me In the moonlight Beneath the stars Which dance in joy At the intertwining Of our souls Joined together Always and forever You bring my life Rich texture Velvets and velour Satin and silk Taffeta tumbling and tussled In playful abandonment Our lives woven in concert Threads bound together In a beautiful mosaic Of living tapestry Take my hand Waltz with me Into the sunset And beyond Through the years Across the expanse And into eternity You and I together Moving ever forward In a choreography of love S.A.T. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully romantic and a lovely expression of your love. Very much enjoyed.  Hugs~
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ This is a heart-write ... nothing prettier in this world~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well Done. I hope "he" reads it as well! INclan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet...James |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
What a lovely tribute to your man. enjoyed! |
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Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
Very sincere and enjoyable to read |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I'm happy you all enjoyed reading this as my husband does not care for poetry one bit and so will probably never read these words. But it was a pleasure to write anyhow.  Susan |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
He should appreciate your interests. You might not even get this *looked through the updated poets to find more of her poems* I guess you wrote this a while ago. Anyway, I figured by how deep your depths go that you were not single. Someone was bound to be drawn to your aura. It almost makes me sad, but happy for you nonetheless. I only hope that without searching someone as beautiful and precious as you would come into my life. Talk your poems to your husband. Especially the silvery moon one. You are one to be cherished. |
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