Open Poetry #32 |
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ideas... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA ![]() |
Wondering where the ideas lurk Ideas we need To make it all work Ideally they would jump right out But often critical assertions make them pout You know the one I mean Criticism takes out the steam Makes the idea person sad or mad Sometimes both if it is really bad Ideals also get berated Just why believe that way The critical monster’s never sated Ideas form and build with confidence Ideas crash so easily Wouldn’t we be better If they were free |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul I can relate so very well to your words. It is nice to read you again and I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul Wouldn’t we be better If they were free Yes! ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, yep, yep . . . wouldn't they ... great choice here... jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes I agree! Excellent write m'friend. Hugs~
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good question! Enjoyed very much, Paul. ![]() |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Totally agree, Paul! Totally agree, and have been in this situation where unable to give ones best, an uncomfortable feeling! Enjoyed you well expressed writing. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ever have what seems like a great idea right before you fall alseep then in the morning realize it was dumb? That is what I was reminded of.. ![]() "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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