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As Words Become My Guide
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As Words Become My Guide |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
As Words Become My Guide From heart and soul they flow when shapeless they take form Story from them doth grow as words become my guide Slowly complete a line breathing into new life Order I must assign that each work in accord Each chapter must begin giving it good balance Pictures of truth and sin thrown in for a scandal Each page takes its shape vision becomes sculpture Painting a new seascape with dream love scenery Each hour as words increase feelings become intense A novel hides beneath words that shape the body Startime April 2004 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Enjoyed the read. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully said Karen, as words build slowly into something very special. As a dream becomes more than just a dream. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sorry I haven't been around much but now that I am semi-retired I have been putting all my time into writing a novel...what an experience that is...Thank you so much for responding... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Your words have guided you well, dear poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karen Your words are always so finely woven and they create a beautiful tapestry of words for us all to admire. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Enjoyed. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Karen!! So good to read your words once again! Please say you'll stick around awhile. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good poem! Yes, words are so powerful! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I echo Barry's sentiments .... good to read you again, Karen. Your heart still flows. *s |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Startime, you are a passionate sculptor of words and I am sure your novel will be a pleasure to read. So nice to see you here! Love, Margherita  |
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