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Internal Damnation
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Internal Damnation |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Internal Damnation shame is the neon sign boasting from atop the steeple where 12-year-old altar boys have been churched then dropped off in hell. ©2004 Grover Gall |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A lot said in so few words. Sad, but so true. JL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Grover~ Yes .....~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
True..sadly true Grover. Powerfully said. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i know exactly what you talk about. nothing seems sacred anymore. very good |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Grover A powerfully written truth.....sadly. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
yes, the point quickly made. So very sad. It makes me want to look for hope and healing for those who have experienced this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always duck when I click on your poems... the punch would knock me out |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The title alone made me know this write would have a bite. Enjoyed the way you put this one down in such a small coffin-like space....hell on earth, so to speak. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I liked! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have wrung the eternal bell with this one Grover. TD |
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